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Welcome to our Eng 100 Blog “Conversations Beyond the Classroom”! The title of this blog refers to the community of active readers & collaborative learners we are creating by sharing our academic writing for Eng 100 with each other + a larger group of students, instructors, academics, and just about anybody who chooses to follow our blog! When you write and post your reader responses here (and, later, as you write your essays for the course), I encourage you to use this audience to conceptualize who you are writing for and, most important, how to communicate your ideas so that this group of academic readers and writers can easily follow your line of thinking. Think about it this way: What do you need to explain and articulate in order for the other bloggers to understand your response to the essays we’ve read in class? What does your audience need to know about those essays and the authors who wrote them? And how can you show your readers, in writing, which ideas you add to these “conversations” that take place in the texts we study?

As students of Eng 100, you will use this blog to begin conversations with other academic writers on campus (students and instructors alike). We become active readers of each other’s writing when we comment on posts here. And, best of all, we are using this space to share ideas! We encourage you to use this blog to further think through the topics and writing strategies you will be introduced to this quarter. As always, be sure to give credit to those people whose ideas you borrow for your own thinking and writing (you should do this in the blog by commenting on their post, but you will also be required to cite what you borrow from your peers/instructors if and when it winds up in your essays. More details on that later…).

Finally, keep in mind that writing to and for this audience is a good way to prepare for the panel of readers (faculty at WCC) who will be reading and assessing your writing portfolio at the end of the quarter. We hope that as a large group of active readers, we can better prepare each other for this experience. But, in the meantime, let’s have fun with it! I am really excited see how far we can take this together!

--Mary Hammerbeck, Instructor of Eng 100



Tuesday, October 12, 2010

Clive Thompson and the New Literacy

In Clive Thompsons recent work titled “Clive Thompson on the New Literacy.” He discusses the technology of today influencing the ability to write, or literacy, of todays generation. John Sutherland is very opposed to the technology stating that “Facebook encourages narcissistic blabbering, video and PowerPoint have replaced carefully crafted essays, and texting has dehydrated language into bleak, bald, sad shorthand.” (par 1) But further on in his article Thompson uses Andrea Lunsford, a professor of writing and rhetoric at Stanford, to debunk the statement Sutherland has made. Lunsford conducted a study called “The Stanford Study of Writing.” This large project spanned five years from ’01 to ’06. Approximately 14,672 writing samples from students were studied, anything from in-class assignments, essays, emails, chat sessions, and even journal entries were taken in. So is technology supposedly killing our literacy? Lunsford thinks not, she claims “I think we’re in the midst of a literacy revolution the likes of which we haven’t seen since Greek civilization.” (3) Something that Clive seems to hint at is that this Literacy Revolution has happened right under our noses. Most students today will only write things in school that have one member in its audience and that is the teacher, or instructor. When writing like this one must only keep in mind the expectations of the person who will judge our text and grade us accordingly. But with this technology brings social networks so large that sometimes the audience may be incomprehensible in size. So when writing thoughts on these networks we only speak our mind, what we feel, there is no rubric or status quo that must be abided by. I personally feel that this Literacy Revolution is a very good thing, and that it is not negatively influencing our ability to write and produce texts. Yes, more often than not I do write correctly in a post on the internet or in a text, or even in an e-mail, but I will use different slang, abbreviations, and words that are rarely found in an essay submitted for a class. But that does not mean I will use that kinds of wording in an essay required for class, I will use proper grammar and no slang, but if it is to be a persuasive essay, it will be persuasive. This is important, in paragraph 5 Clive states that “Before the internet came along, most Americans never wrote anything, ever, that wasn’t a school assignment. Unless they got a job that required producing text, they’d leave school and virtually never construct a paragraph again.” This Literacy Revolution is amazing. Todays students are adapting their writing for different needs, situations, circumstances, and audiences. They are changing the technique that they use, the kind of tone they produce, all to get the point across, that main idea. I can tell, because I like to write a lot, whether it is in a text message sent from my phone, to a post that nearly anyone can read on the internet, I get the point across.

2 comments:

  1. I like your use of the word "debunk"...it is perfect for describing the arguement in this article and what Lunsford's studies were used for.

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  2. "But that does not mean I will use that kinds of wording in an essay required for class, I will use proper grammar and no slang, but if it is to be a persuasive essay, it will be persuasive"

    "I can tell, because I like to write a lot, whether it is in a text message sent from my phone, to a post that nearly anyone can read on the internet, I get the point across."

    These two quotes stood out to me the most because I could compleatly agree with them and even wrote something like this in my responce to Thompson's writing. I think you are right when you bring up the idea on how writing occurs so much more than it did back then because of the new technology. I notice I write so much more than I would if there was none of the new technology. I also liked the fact that you were saying that even though through texting there might be bad grammer it doesnt mean people will be writing incorectly in an essay.

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