The essay “The Confident Gaze” by Shekhar Deshpande raises some very critical points about the magazine National Geographic on both ends of the spectrum. The beginning of the essay is more pro-National Geographic, and as the essay unfolds it goes more into the anti-National Geographic. In the beginning Shekhar states, “It is a magazine of choice of teachers of history, anthropology and culture in general school. Middle class parents have regarded the investment in the subscription as necessary for the exposure that the magazine gives their children about the world.” (par 2.) Shekhar has many good things to say about the magazine that most Americans would agree with. This magazine brings good knowledge and interesting information that all of us are interested in. On the other hand its almost our only source of information about the other parts of the world. Meaning that they have quite a bit of control on what our outlook on the rest of the world is. Towards the end he states, “One of the clever ways in which National Geographic magazine constructs the image of the other, thereby providing an occasion for identity formation to its readers, is by representing a combination of the traditional and the modern or the Western.” National Geographic is many peoples only way to see the rest of the world, and they are using it to make us look glamorous and almost fear the rest of the world.
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Monday, November 15, 2010
Deshpande
Deshpande Summary
The Confident Gaze
Summary
The essay, “the Confident Gaze” written by Shekhar Deshpande focues on how National Geographic takes pictures of different cultures and shows them to us in the way we like to see them and gives us the views from the American eye. In his essay he claims, “Human suffering becomes worth a good image.”(2) What he means by that is that people like to see stuff like that and they are interested in things of that context so if they can get those pictures then more people will start to read his magazine and become interested in the articles. I also think that is correct, if you give the reader what they want they will continue to read your magazine. Another claim from Deshpande. “While we admire the accomplishments of its photographers to bring us the rest of the world, we forget that the photographs and the contexts in which they are placed represent a very conscious effort by the editors to make the world a happy place and a happy place especially for the western eye. What he is saying is that even though we admire the photographers for getting us pictures from all over the world and all the different cultures, they change and edit them to make places seem happier and better than they actually are as to if you went there.
Dashpande
English 100L
Shekhar Dashpande Summary
Shekhar Dashpande’s article “the confident gaze” is about how national geographic takes pictures, but the pictures have nothing to do with the point of the story. A good example of this is when Deshpande makes the statement “while we admire the accomplishments of its photographers to bring us the rest of the world, we forget that the photographs and the contexts in which they are placed represent a very conscious effort by the editors to make the world a happy place and a happy place especially for the western eye”. He is trying to say that the pictures in national geographic with effort are made to appeal to the western eye. This strategy may work, but a lot of the photographs do not apply to what is really going on. The strategy as Dashpande describes it as is “one of the clever ways in which National Geographic magazine constructs the image of the other, thereby providing and occasion for identity formation to its readers, is by representing as combination of the traditional and the modern or the western”. National Geographic makes their pictures so that we the people in the western area can relate and it will appeal to us even though the picture has nothing to do with the main point.